List of Corrections for Anonymous Writing Project
Page Paragraph Original Correction
1 1 vision: we vision. We
2 Yet she She
books” books,”
5 2 with on with
8 top page antimonies antinomies
11 n4 Insituto Instituto
14 1 long fulfilled long, fulfilled
2 analyses analyzes (press requires American spelling . . . )
as an moral as a moral
15 top thought, were thought were
“our, Hitler and after “our Hitler and after
2 lives, that lives that
was adult, both was an adult, both
18 1 themselves “Falling themselves: “Falling
19 3 not what they do”; not what they do;”
20 1 malgre malgré
2 identity, not suffered identity, nor suffered
25 2 categories categorize
in quote no mean no means
3 Hitler, can Hitler can
to think, and to think and
29 n8 Heidegger”; Heidegger;”
30 n10 top her death the her death, the
n27 female pupil female pupils
31 n61 analyses analyzes
34 2 practice is due practice are due
49 2 practice I practice, I
but impossible) but impossible,
50 2 bottom form and specifically myth in form, and specifically myth, in
51 Chapter 2 Notes Notes
53 1 which came about which come about
55 top Hannah’s Hannah
2 in quote fear . . . A fear. . . . A
59 1 chivalric Chivalric
61 2 change of roles seems changes of role seem
63 top the Castle the castle
mid page knight asks knight, asks
undisclosed hidden hidden
66 3 Ate Até
70 n4 events is events and
71 n26 a corn on a horn on
n27 the first meaning the first public meaning
72 n29 top centre center
73 n64 top centred centered
n71 period placed at end
78 1 centre center
79 2 La Gioconda39; La Gioconda;39
80 end of para Head. Rosa Head, Rosa
1 commentates comments
82 2 around Dr Tulp around Dr. Tulp
85 2 (1658) (1659)
92 1 Since most of Though most of
94 1 next-to-the-last penultimate
95 1 realligns realigns
100 1 Rapunzel inability Rapunzel-like inability
102 top and a Briar hedge and a briar hedge
106 n66 Motif K521.1 (Motif K521.1).
108 top to see, squarely to see squarely
2 long hot talk long talk
109 top Once could One could
113 3 that involves that involve
genders to can genders to
117 1 to an transcendent to a transcendent
2 can related can relate
118 4 We inassimilable We are inassimilable
120 2 in quote there is not there is no
just after quote us, as us us, as us
121 top that others that of others
124 n6 handshake rapprochement
125 n28 impossible difference Impossible Difference
n37 These passages -delete passages-
n50 quotation to be quotation would be
126 n55 in note 27 in note 29
n58 is topic is a topic
n63 Harper’s Magazine Harper’s Magazine
129 1 industrial revolution Industrial Revolution
applies to in an applies in an
130 1 in quote . . . we cannot . . . [W]e cannot
132 top the latter’s desire his desire (the pronoun reference is clear enough)
1 virginity sexuality (Marina, at least, is not a virgin)
135 1 in Hegelian dialectic dialectically
136 1 request of her mother’s request of his mother’s
2 when Marina agrees once Marina offers
137 1 by sharing the same mistress by being mistress to both
138 1 last line nearly need need
139 1 man-made such cultural
140 1 colonizer-- colonizer,
underclass-- underclass,
serve as that serve as
141 1 use to so used to be so
142 1 man-made social
2 in quote friends of tyrants friend of tyrants
last line on page may have engages engages
143 top the existence of God the absence of God
1 ambivalence, close., close.
2 although which Murdoch although Murdoch
144 top being critical of deleted that phrase
n2 In an 1978 In a 1978 (US usage)
n7 theatre theater (yeh, I know, sorry for all the cultural
imperialism there, press’s orders)
145 n17 (1952) and (1952), and
146 n63 she did have she did not have
147 1 ‘Sartre “Sartre
also become also becomes
148 1 will write about will discuss
149 3 Murdoch properly Murdoch properly,
153 top pour-soi: and pour-soi and --deleted the :
1 Sartre was, that Sartre was that
156 bottom evocative visualization style to evocative style of imagery to
157 1 Yet for Murdoch Sartre Yet for Murdoch, Sartre
158 1 person male voice narrator person male narrator
162 2 that humans” moral problems that moral problems
in their relationship in a relationship
165 n1 I will refer to --deleted repetition—
(1903-1976) they (1903-1976); they
n16 hermeneutics of suspicion Hermeneutics of Suspicion
n21 negation of happiness Negation of Happiness
166 n41 rather then rather than
178 2 helps to makes helps to make
186 2 , i.e., death. , i.e. death.
188 n42 sado-masochism sadomasochism
220 n5 she is some she is in some
n10 that there some that there is some
n23 one”s one’s
222 1 Fisher Fischer
“goo’” “good”
223 1 Fisher Fischer
Patti Pattie
224 top with which I agree with with which I agree
works, i. e., that she works, i. e. that she
3 Patti Pattie
225 1 Testament, connect Testament and connect
centre center
226 mid page argument against argument for
bot page Murdoch here? Murdoch here.
227 mid page ‘tranquility” “tranquility”
he inspires, is whether he inspires, whether
228 1 Fisher Fischer
229 1 of the inner of the interior
2 The encounters others Encounters with others
an “other” which forces an “other” forces
231 mid page Patti’s Pattie’s
near bot text can we text, can we
232 mid page to continental writing to Continental writing
human condition” human condition,”
235 n13 statement disagree statement I disagree
n16 2001. ‘I have 2001. “I have
assessment.’ assessment.”
n19 Mille Miller
n24 Gerde Gerede 2x
236 n45 ideas and ideas in
239 2 an symmetry a symmetry
240 top room to reader room to the reader
1 mid page towards to
241 1 The Idea of Perfection, “The Idea of Perfection,”
platonic Platonic
2 The argument of her Her argument for her
allows this; the task allows this: the task
243 1 philosophy for the and philosophy and
by a reference by reference
take possession of. possess.
thought, between demonstrating thought, demonstrating
244 2 a love of good a love of the good
245 1 correspondences that can be perceived, although
correspondences, although
247 1 whom her family approves of of whom her family approves
248 top ethics of virtue virtue ethics
that is to say “women that is “women
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